dimarts, 20 de maig del 2008

Writing : Report

Yesterday, in Santa Coloma de Gramenet a boy was run over by a coach. The boy was 13, anda when he was knocked down he had been playing football.
An ambulance arrived rapidly, but the heavy traffic didn't to be there before. The ambulance man said that he couldn't arrive to the accident scene, because another accident had ocurred in the road.
When the ambulance arrived at the traffic scene, the boy was so injured, and the ambulance man tried to save the boy's life.
The man drove the boy to the hospital and there, the doctors saved his life. The boy's father said that he was extremely grateful to the ambulance man.

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Mónica Ramos Caballero ha dit...

HI VICTOR!!

SORRY BUT THERE ARE SOME MISTAKES...

Yesterday, in Santa Coloma de Gramenet a boy was run over by a coach. The boy was 13, and(a) when he was knocked down he had been playing football.
An ambulance arrived rapidly, but the heavy traffic (didn't to)COULDN'T be there before. The ambulance man said that he couldn't arrive (to)AT the accident scene because another accident had ocurred (in)ON the road.
When the ambulance arrived at the traffic scene, the boy was so injured, and the ambulance man tried to save the boy's life.
The man drove the boy to the hospital and there, the doctors saved his life. The boy's father said that he was extremely grateful to the ambulance man.